In the 1960s, more and more people began coming out of the
closet and were openly gay. The
newspaper, “Come Out” was published to give
a voice to the rapidly growing gay community and to, “fight for the freedom of
the homosexual.” The newspaper used
pathos to persuade their readers that it is okay to be gay and someone’s
sexuality should not determine what rights they have. The tone of the newspaper was humorous, yet
serious. The author made jokes to
lighten the mood of the topic and raise the mood of the audience, yet still got
their point across that “BEING HOMOSEXUAL SAYS ONLY ONE THING: EMOTIONALLY YOU
PREFER YOUR OWN SEX. IT SAYS NOTHING
ABOUT YOUR WORTH, YOUR VALUE AS A HUMAN BEING.”
Like the protest posters, this newspaper used all caps throughout the
article. They tried to emphasize the
important points and really grab the reader’s attention. The capital letters also helped the readers
feel what the writer felt, because it indicated where the author was most
passionate. The article also stated that
gay people were coming out in a community
that numbers in the millions to inform readers that homosexuals were not alone
and had emotional and physical support in numbers. People reading this knew that they had people
to relate to. Finally, the article
concludes with a series of questions, which caused readers to question their
beliefs and how they really felt about gay rights. This newspaper appeals to readers’ emotions
and stresses that gay people are just as good as straight people and should not
be treated any differently.
Good use of color and linking out. You did a good job of identifying what kind of appeals to pathos the newspaper used and then provided examples. However, using more direct quotes could help your ethos of the post. Also, it would be helpful to talk about specific emotions that could have arisen from the pathetic appeals; for example, "the all capital letters gave a sense of urgency, prompting the reader to feel the need to act right away." Overall, good points. Just elaborate a little more on the emotions of the pathetic appeals. Also, just watch out for ending sentences with prepositions.
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